Found this article today on Tami Cowden’s site (thanks to a tip from Susan Meier in her workshop!)
She gives excellent examples of ways writers can use physical description, introspection, words and deeds, and attitudes of others to demonstrate character.
Why does my writing look more like her “before” examples, when I want it to be like the “after”?
Rich, powerful, revealing.
I have to remember this when I do my edits. Makes me see my writing is still too much bare-bones telling in places. I need to flesh it out.